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On "Save the Pearls"

So... I've had some time to ruminate on this 'book'... "Save the Pearls". I put book in air quotes because this doesn't deserve to be called a book. It's a self serving, poor me, white people are OMG oppressed in this far flung, post apocalyptic, fictitious world so this is totally ok, AMIRITE?! oppression fantasy brought to you.

Here's the "About" blurb. I apologize in advance for any rage you may experience, but I didn't write this. Bold commentary mine.

Would you betray your loved ones—and maybe your entire race—to avoid a horrible death?

In a post-apocalyptic world where resistance to an overheated environment defines class and beauty, Eden Newman’s white skin brands her as a member of the lowest class, a weak and ugly Pearl. The clock is ticking: if Eden doesn’t mate before her eighteenth birthday, she’ll be left outside to die. (Humanity is fucked then if people who don't mate by 18 are left to die, shortest dystopian epic ever)

If only a dark-skinned Coal from the ruling class would pick up her mate option, she’d be safe. But no matter how much Eden darkens her skin and hair, she’s still a Pearl, still ugly-cursed with a tragically low mate-rate of 15%.

Just maybe one Coal sees the real Eden and will save her-she has begun secretly dating her handsome co-worker Jamal. But when Eden unwittingly compromises her father’s secret biological experiment, she is thrown into the eye of a storm-and the remaining patch of rainforest, a strange and dangerous land.

Eden must fight to save her father, who may be humanity’s last hope, while standing up to a powerful beast-man she believes is her enemy, despite her overwhelming attraction to him. To survive, Eden must change-but only if she can redefine her ideas of beauty-and of true love.

Acclaimed writer VICTORIA FOYT <--- acclaimed by WHO? blends equal parts suspense and philosophy, adventure and romance, in this captivating dystopian novel set in a terrifying future, which is all too easy to imagine. <--- only if you are a white person who is terrified of becoming a minority and what it could mean if *gasp* there are more of them than us.

The first installment in the Save the Pearls series of fantasy romance novels, Revealing Eden recently won the 2012 Eric Hoffer Award in the Young Adult Category, the Best YA Fantasy Award from Books & Authors, and was runner up in the 2012 Los Angeles Book Festival!

NO, JUST FUCKING NO. Save yourself the trouble and embarrassment of attempting to make a "statement" when all you've done is show how very, very little you know of how the world works. This attempt at showing some alternate reality, where white people are oppressed, devalued and dying out because they have a low mate rate because they can't survive a super heated environment due to their lack of melatonin is perverse.

It's a sad attempt at showcasing their own little world view (emphasis on little, since their writing and attempts and stemming the tide of their own fail on FB shows how narrow minded the author is) and trying to make some kind of ... argument for something...

The author has posted a response on the Facebook page, here and many people have responded. It looks like the author is deleting comments that disagree with her post, her book and this whole concept. Here's what I had to say:

Intent means nothing. Look at the vocabulary used in the book. Coals for dark skinned people, supposedly those that are "Coals"a re more worthy and valuable. Do you understand that coal does not have value except as fuel, something to be used and tossed away? Yet the poor, oppressed white people in this book are still called "Pearls". Pearls, a semi-precious item in today's world, something of intrinsic value, that is coveted, and treasured by others. 

The snippets I've seen are poorly written, the cover is offensive and you jumping up and down saying I'm not a racist is full of fail. Try harder, do some research into what words mean as well as caste systems, and try again once you have some research, some facts and can do better than this...whatever this is.

In choosing to KEEP TALKING instead of listening to the numerous POC (and non-POC) voices telling her how racist, fucked up, vilifying and fetishizing this thing is, the author is trying the usual tactic of repeating ad nauseum, but I'm not a racist! I'm not a racist! And this goes back to Jay Smooth's point of how to tell the difference in someone doing/saying something racist, but that doesn't mean they are a racist.   

I'd liked to have given the writer of this fictitious world the benefit of the doubt, but when her responses basically boil down to OMG YOU ALL I AM NOT RACIST, STOP PICKING ON ME. I AM CRYING ALL MY WHITE WOMAN TEARS, WHY CAN'T YOU JUST TRY TO UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M DOING HERE!!!

I can't do that because of her oh so special comment here:

Conceivably, if the book had not reached the African-American community of readers, if such a category still exists, perhaps there might be some backlash. The first young African American reader who responded to me loved the book. But then, she’s the kind of free spirit who would eschew limiting herself to a single category."

That gave any inclination I had to be civil in this post went right the fuck out my living room window.

"IF SUCH A CATEGORY STILL EXISTS?" You know what Victoria Hoyt, FUCK YOU. I've been reading since before you were thought of you privileged dumb ass. Who the fuck do you think you are to make such a statement? Clearly reading, writing, and comprehension are skills you lack based on the this thing you are attempting to pass off as a serious look at "reverse-racism", what-if scenarios. 

Here's something for you to read, print, and tack it next to your monitor because you need a lesson in how not to continue to fuck up regarding race issues:

I didn't mean to and other such nonsense from allies:


Also, the Invisible Knapsack from Peggy McIntosh is required reading for you (and anyone else dumb enough to think your book is anything but an epic case for race fail).

I'd say just fucking Google it but it's clear that using research tools and methods and actually trying to sound like an intelligent human being is beyond you, so have a freebie.

Ahem, back to what I was saying... oh yes how this attempt at post apocalytpic dystopia (read white oppression, mandingo fantasy gone wild) is a piece of tripe.

In going back to the site (shudder) to get more reference material I found this "video-log" of the main protaganist. SHE IS IN BLACKFACE, FUCKING BLACKFACE YOU HEAR ME. (video is here, watch at your own risk, I am not responsible for any damage caused after viewing it)

Just... really? Mate rate? Is that what people have been reduced to you in your fantasy world? Mate or die? If that's the best you can come up with as a plot device, I would skip this tripe anyway but the whole thing about "Coals" and "Pearls" just cements the fact you are naive, privileged and have no clue about real world race issues.

Let me tell you something... words have meaning, they have value. Tossing about words like Coals, savage, beastly in reference to the antagonist who discovers her father's experiments and tosses her out in the rain forest does not endear me, you want-to-be wordsmith. It shows that you still buy into the savage, hyper-sexualized, black man trope. It shows me that you couldn't be bothered to try and find some way to describe the superior, darker people in this book without finding a way to still reduce them to nothing by your choice of words. 

The fact that whites are described as "Pearls", something precious, to be coveted and desired, "saved" shows your oppression fantasy quite clearly for the world to see, and it's ugly. You should cover it up. I also want to know in what world (oops, yours apparently) that the girl used in the YouTube video would be considered ugly? She looks like someone dabbed her in brown shoe polish and she needs a bath but she is not ugly. I suppose there are people who tell her, you're not bad looking for a Pearl in your book? (my guess is not really).

Someone with some sense, and a red pen should have stopped you when you pitched this idea to begin with. Someone with sense and editorial knowledge should have sat you down and explained how racism actually works in the real world, how the caste system works in the real world before letting you attempt whatever the hell you have let loose on the world.

Congratulations, you have created something I hold in greater derision that 50 Shades of Grey. You have also shown that you need some very harsh life lessons in order to see that racism is more than you conceive of in your attempt to show people the wrongs of racism. You failed Hoyt, seriously, epic-ally failed in Eden.

Also, other people have taken this concept and done it WELL. [Noughts and Crosses, Blonde Roots] You should read their books, take notes and once you come out from the cave of Tropes, caricatures and fallacy that your characters reside in, perhaps learn to listen and try again, or not. I'm sure none of us would mind if you stopped attempting to teach people about concepts you don't even understand yourself. 

Originally posted on tanyad @Dreamwidth. Feel free to comment here, or there


( 16 comments — Leave a comment )
Jul. 28th, 2012 08:43 pm (UTC)
I really want to link to this -- can you unlock it?
Jul. 28th, 2012 08:58 pm (UTC)
Jul. 28th, 2012 11:11 pm (UTC)
Maybe she should have called them snowflakes, since they melt in the heat and each one is so unique and different...
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:33 am (UTC)
Perfect zinger is perfect.
Jul. 29th, 2012 01:29 am (UTC)
God help me, but I think she actually means well. But as God is my witness, she's so spectacularly bad at it, it makes my soul hurt, not to mention my head.
Jul. 29th, 2012 07:47 pm (UTC)
If she means well, she only means so for other white people. She's pretty overtly racist.
Jul. 31st, 2012 07:13 pm (UTC)
or call the book "clutch the pearls?"
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:17 am (UTC)
I almost feel guilty for tweeting incessantly about it when I first discovered it... feels like I'm responsible for giving it any airtime =(
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:32 am (UTC)
Then I'm guilty too, since I've talked about it non-stop since yesterday.
Jul. 30th, 2012 01:04 am (UTC)
I think it's good to bring stuff like this out into the open so that other, less-stupid creators of the privileged variety don't make the same mistakes.

At first I was thinking, "Maybe she wants to give white people a feel for what it's like to be the minority?" but then as I read your post I was like, what in the hell is this woman thinking. She obviously did not do her homework before all of this happened.
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:33 am (UTC)
yeah i kinda felt that way too but then at the same time, some shit needs to get called out. so the next time i'm on a panel at a con talking about the rampant bigotry in the spec fic genre, i wish a mofo would look at me crazy.
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:33 am (UTC)
YES! Please tell me you are going to flay this wide open? Please?

/makes popcorn
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:39 am (UTC)
Girl you know I'm on it.


Say the word, I'm breaking out the macros.
Jul. 29th, 2012 12:55 am (UTC)
Dude... here's what I got for dat snowflake:

Jul. 29th, 2012 01:23 am (UTC)
I need a laugh today, and that those macros provided it.

Edited at 2012-07-29 01:30 am (UTC)
Jul. 31st, 2012 11:25 am (UTC)
Y'know, it's funny that real people put their real names on some of the shit they say on Facebook.

Just sayin'.
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